Oh shit.

This is supposed to be my final edit:

To be fair, not every page is like this. This is the result of changing two, tiny, insignificant lines in the previous chapter so that they are now fairly important lines. Unfortunately, that tiny change meant that this chapter needed a whole heap of revision.

It is, however, coming along nicely. Well, that's what I think when I can see beyond the red pen, anyway.

Pip xxx